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Light and Only Light |
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I will know him
(c) Copyright February 2005 Nordette Adams Do You Speak Your Lover's Language? |
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| Confessions of a Jersey Goddess |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson | 3/15/2005 |
| and it need be recognized!!!
that's it thats the way it goes enjoyed | |
| Reviewed by Barbara Terry | 3/13/2005 |
| You go girl! This was very nice and I enjoyed reading it. I agree with Lisa, I hope that you find that Paul Bunyon walking with Blue, to take into his strong arms and call you his, with sweet kisses, hugs, and words of love, that we all like to hear. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), Barbie
"if I have to...Then I may as well be." | |
| Reviewed by Kate Burnside | 3/13/2005 |
| Go you, Nordette. I love this shout with the clout! As refreshing as a girl's night hairwash!! I am so sorry that you have had to suffer all that you have in the dark, but the glory of light, as you say, is its keen exposure, and it brings a kind of Hallelujah chorus of triumph and thankfulness! Funnily enough, my next post lined up says much the same thing - only not as eloquently and lyrically as this, nor with such full-on full-bloodedness. Yeah, livin in the light is where it's at, definitely. TY and bless you, Kate xx | |
| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner | 3/13/2005 |
| Nordette,
That's what I love about you. You say what you mean and mean what you say; there is no two facedness about you. Honest in emotion, courageous in strength, I have no doubt that you can't survive anything! BRAVA! on such an excellent piece. :) WHATTA WOMAN! You inspire me-- (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) | |
| Reviewed by _ Aberjhani | 3/13/2005 |
| These lines burn with soulful wonders to behold as if each was tongue-lifted straight from the mouth of an exploding star. But then they did come from the pen of an exceptionally gifted poet and that is something very much like a star exploding kaleidoscopic rays of joy and sorrow and undiluted Self. Wonderful to behold indeed. | |
| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes | 3/13/2005 |
| There can be no light without the darkness dear friend!!
And you painted the picture well here!! Love Tinka | |
| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik | 3/13/2005 |
| Where do I start, Nordette?... the internal rhyme, the locomotive, non-moss-gathering rhythm that barreled along... then the "upside"... and, oh, the yin/yang, dark, light visions. What a poetic painting of "been there, done that" to "I'm worth it!"
As a negative produces a colorful photo to treasure, so you have done here. Lose the blues and dance in the sun! You are not just a damned important poet, you inspire in the truest sense of that word! What a woman! Yeah! katy xox | |
| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton | 3/13/2005 |
| The dark breeds discontent and the light, as they say, shines the glow of truth on that discontent and thereby, you can see where you are stepping. Well, actually THEY didn't say that, but there is nothing wrong with a little amateur, homespun psychology from time to time. Loved the cry in the dark because you did, indeed, shine the light on your claim. | |
| Reviewed by Jude Forese | 3/13/2005 |
| awesome flow and momentum to this extrememly defined and conclusive poem, extrapolating your heart's demands and desires with an inner fire and peace .. great stuff, Nordette ... | |
| Reviewed by Henry Stevens | 3/13/2005 |
| Oh Nordette, what a beautiful poem, you touch my heart, I hear your cry. Henry | |
| Reviewed by Mr. Ed | 3/13/2005 |
| We should all seek the light - it never lets you down. | |
| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK | 3/13/2005 |
| Little Off Wall In Love Huh!
TRASK | |
| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers | 3/13/2005 |
| Nordette, This is about as 'in your face' and 'honest' as one can get.
I felt empowered and strong, as I read it, and I hope that for you, You find that Paul Bunyun and Knight you are needing! Wonderful write and read! Lisa | |
| Reviewed by Annette Hansen | 3/13/2005 |
| This is both confronting, interesting, poetic and lovely all at once. Beautiful, but not frivolous. | |
| Reviewed by Regis (Reg) Auffray | 3/13/2005 |
| I like the introspection and the assertiveness in this poem, Nordette; and of course, the sharing. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis | |
| Reviewed by E T Waldron | 3/12/2005 |
| Though I've read this before it is worth another read it is so excellent!Blessings to you Nordette!
etw | |
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